hey! I made a haiku!

[Ray]

ten! fourteen! hut! hut!

grunting men chase bouncing balls

a witless distraction

[blackdog4444]

The last line had 6 syllables not 5. But still, very good!

[Ray]

The last line had 6 syllables not 5. But still, very good!

Thanks! I'm just an amateur.

[blackdog4444]

Don't worry! I suck at writing... period. lol

[Indurrago]

Cool, I feel inspired alittle to make my own but I forgot the format. It's 5, 7, 5, for syllables in each line right?

[Ray]

Yep, I checked wikipedia --you're right --5 - 7 - 5. It's an interesting challenge to express the essense of something in so few lines --or is it writer's block?

I know III had a hard time.

good luck

[blackdog4444]

Only if I could write [or type] as good as Ray...

[Ray]

: P

[blackdog4444]

Ahhh, you!! lol just kidding.
Ray, you got mad skills!!!

[Ray]

ha ha ha ha --if YOU say so, then I guess it must be so.

BTW, where'd you get that cool avatar?

[blackdog4444]

I got the avatar off Photobucket. Why, do you want one?

[Ray]

nahh.. thanks though.

[blackdog4444]

Your welcome Always glad to help you.

[Indurrago]

I made this in five minutes lol! Hope you enjoy it.

For the ball they run
For your money made they sweat
The sad cycle of sports

[abitagirl]

My turn! My turn!


Your team won the game
You yell, "We won! We did it!"
You didn't do squat